Thursday, August 20, 2009

My third foot print

"Handle is of Solid Brass", the Shop keeper neared me.

My hand was fondling the Walking Stick's body.

"It's Walnut finish Sir"

Then he added, "We give 25 years warranty for these models"

Aged 70, I smiled at his deceitful words and ironies of life.

"Will my life last more than warranty of Walking stick?"

10 Observations:

pawan said...

That's not too surprising. But you could have made into this way.

""Handle is of Solid Brass", the Shop keeper neared me.


My hand was fondling the Walking Stick's body.

"It's Walnut finish Sir"

Aged 70, I smiled at his deceitful words and ironies of life.

"Will my life last more than warranty of Walking stick?"

Then he added, "We give 50 years warranty for these models"

Seems a bit heavy, but I guess you got my point!
I hereby publish my first 55fiction, here on your blog!


An interesting one though!
Liked it!
Cheers!

Shilpa Garg said...

Hey! That's a good one!
Your 55 Fiction is inspired by our daily normal life!! That's such a fresh approach!!
Keep it up!
You may like to check my 100th post again!! :)

Shruti said...

completely moved!!!
great of you anna!!!
it was so nice reading your posts!!

Shruti said...

anna,
Check out my new 55Fiction and give me your feedback
:)

http://whysoserioustoday.blogspot.com said...

woof ... u showed the reality called death in jus 55 words ... hatssss off :)
cheers n thanks so much for dropping by :)
loved ur blog
I will cum again
I promise :)

onlooker said...

my my my!! :) arent you on a roll or what!! wow! have to come back to catch up. great work!

Musings of a lonely traveler said...

@ Pawan!
Thats the real other perspective Pawan! Thanks for this interesting offset of my fiction :)

@ Shilpa
I was moved to see my name in your 100th post Shilpa. I still remember your help in the initial stage. Have a wonderful trip to Ladakh :)

@ Shruti
Thanks sister for your stead inspiring words. I did visit your new fiction and posted my comments :)

@ Suga!
Welcome to my blog. Thanks for your comments. It's my pleasure to see you on ma blog page hereon.

Musings of a lonely traveler said...

@ Onlooker
Glad to see you after such a long time. Who else incited me to blog other than Mrs. V? :)

Ekam said...

That was one great post!
You know what, I read somewhere that you are such a great fiction -writer. Now I totally agree. God bless you:)

Musings of a lonely traveler said...

Ekam!
I wonder where you read about me as I'm one of the least noticed bloggers, I believe. Anyways welcome to my page and I'm overjoyed to find a follower in you.

God bless you :)

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