"You dreamt of well filled with full ears of corn? Omen of prosperity" Kumar's wife was guffawing with hollow mouth.
Kumar, the farmer, came out of his hut and looked at the sky. The sun is retiring.
The lifeless weedy field was beckoning him. He got into them in search of rats for his dinner.
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a touching "55 Fiction" post man...
glad am ur follower :)
Aww.. It was different... I wonder what made you think in such manner... Its really nice and touchy in its own way!!
Hi Sathish!
Glad that you liked this micro-fiction; keep looking for more :)
Hi Deepika!
Glad that you liked it; sometimes the bitter realities of life are close to our heart than anyother mundane thing :)
Nice writing.. kinda different.. but intense...
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anna!!
a chord struck me while reading this!
This is not fiction 55!! Instead we can call this as factual 55!! awesome!!
@ workhard
Thanks for visiting my blog; glad that you liked it. Keep visiting :)
@ Shruti
Hi sister! if you find that as apt, here we go let's call that as Factual 55. Shruti you are a great inspirer. Thank you ma :)
anna i feel really happy to hear that am an inspirer for someone!!
But i don't know in what i inspired you
Hi Shruti, I mentioned about your inspiration comments sister :)
That is very good 55 fiction. You ported the picture so nicely.I agree with Sruti.It's factual 55!
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@ Pra
Thanks Pra; glad that you liked it :)
@ Shruti!
I checked Shruti and commented too :)
that is something very intense, Bro...
I am happy there are people who think about these things..
and I liked it.... the element of suspense and surprise in other of your posts as well..
I will follow this blog from now on....
do visit mine, if you feel so!!
R S
Glad that you liked my blog page; I'll visit your blog for sure R S; keep visiting :)
hello sir..
I hope you put me in your blogroll... this way u can keep track.. I am following u anyways...
cheers!!
and thanx for visiting my page...
Such a thoughtful story.. In just 55 words, you managed to say a lot.. and so effortlessly!
Nice blog, I'll surely be back to read more :)
anna,
Check out my recent post re:)
@ lostworld!
Thanks for visiting my blog; glad that U liked it. Keep visiting :)
@ Shruti
Visited and commented already :)
I dunno how I missed it, but a very beautiful one!
Really beautiful, its high time you take up short stories!
OMG!! This is truly amazing!!
What a tale!!
You are becoming a pro at 55 Fiction!! Liked it!!
@ Pawan
Yep I'm working on some Pawan; thanks a lot for your comments :)
@ Shilpa
Thanks a lot Shilpa :)
Hi
it's so touching....
i liked ur blogvvery much... :)
cheers!!
Hi Amit
Welcome to my blog; glad that you liked it :)
hii
it moved me.... very touching..
A S!
Welcome to my blog; glad that you liked it :)
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